Chapter 260
Chapter 260
“Um!”
“Chinese cabbage.”
“Your story is very good.”
“You did a good job with your storyline, but you two are newcomers to the industry after all.”
“If your writing skills are good enough, I plan to shoot your story after I finish filming.”
“In addition to being shown in Hong Kong, it will also be shown in mainland China, as well as in Western countries such as the United States.”
Hearing what He Yuhao said, the very happy voice of cabbage came from the phone.
“This teacher, is it true?”
“Teacher, please rest assured, Sister Lanxiang and I will definitely not let you down~”
He Yuhao also believed the words of cabbage.
From the period when He Yuhao taught the two girls, it can be seen that the two girls are very talented in story creation.
“”You in Heaven”, “The Way to Find Heaven”, “The Guardian Angel”, these three names are all good, and they can all be used as the title of this movie.”
“So this movie, let’s use these three names!”
“According to the culture of Xiangjiang, the name “You in Paradise” is more suitable for the Hong Kong release.”
“If the film is released in mainland China, the title of the film will be “”Angel Patronus”.”
“The last name, “Finding the Road to Heaven”, will be shown in the United States and other Western countries, so let’s use this name!”
Shortly after.
He Yuhao and Cabbage ended the call.
Hong Kong.
The hometown of Xiangjiang.
“Chinese cabbage.”
After Wan Lanxiang finished using the toilet, she walked back.
As soon as she came back, she saw that the cabbage ended the call.
“Teacher, what do you say?”
“You in Heaven”, “The Way to Find Heaven”, and “The Guardian Angel”. I wonder which one the teacher chose as the title of the film?”
After returning the phone to Wan Lanxiang, Bai Cai replied with a smile, “The teacher said that all three names can be chosen at the same time.”
“what!”
Hearing this, Wan Lanxiang was very surprised.Seeing Yi Wan Lanxiang’s surprised expression, she didn’t find it strange at all.
When Bai Cai was on the phone with He Yuhao before, she heard He Yuhao say that all three names were chosen at the same time.
Her expression was the same as the current Wan Lanxiang, she was also very surprised.
“The teacher said……”
Next, Cabbage repeated what He Yuhao told her on the phone.
“The teacher really said that, it’s really nice”
Hear the words.
Wan Lanxiang was very happy.
“Now the title of the film is also available.”
“Can we start writing the script for the movie?”
“Uh-huh!”
Cabbage nodded vigorously.
“Okay, Sister Lanxiang, let’s discuss how to write the beginning of “You in Heaven” from today.”
“At the beginning of the movie, I think it’s important to first clarify that the eldest grandson Miaomiao is cute and she is very well-behaved and sensible, and then she often gets the care of all the yamen in the yamen.”
The eldest grandson, Miaomiao, is the six-year-old daughter of the female catcher in the story.
When Wan Lanxiang heard this, she shook her head.
She did not agree with the opening of the cabbage.
After she shook her head, she said, “Bichoi, I don’t think it’s a good start.”
“Sister Lanxiang, I think this is a bad start.”
“So, Sister Lanxiang, have you thought of a better start?”
“Sister Lanxiang, how do you want to start?”
The reason why Wan Lanxiang disagrees with the opening of the cabbage is because this opening did not attract her, even her, and what about the audience?
Wan Lanxiang decided to start the game, and it should be pointed out that female arresters have solved countless cases and are the nemesis of bad guys.
First of all, let the audience know that this female catcher has suffered a lot.
Next, I will introduce the eldest grandson Miaomiao’s well-behaved and sensible, and show the lovely side of the eldest grandson Miaomiao.
Wan Lanxiang thought of this, and then expressed her thoughts.
Such a start can draw hatred.
The reason was that in solving the case, the female arrester had a strong opponent for the criminal. In the end, her daughter, the eldest grandson, Miaomiao, died at the hands of this big opponent.
Of course, at the beginning, a hint was given to the audience, suggesting that this powerful opponent would definitely kill Miaomiao, the eldest grandson of the female catcher’s daughter.
But the female catcher didn’t know that there was a black hand who was about to kill her daughter.
This helps to arouse the emotions of the audience.
Let the audience look forward to the next story.
If the opening is arranged like this, the audience will be very much looking forward to when the female catcher will know that a black hand is going to kill her daughter, the eldest grandson Miaomiao.
I hope that the eldest grandson Miaomiao can escape the murder of black hands.
……
“Uh-huh!”
“Sister Lanxiang, let’s write this opening according to your settings!”
In the end, after more than two hours of discussion between the two women, the two women finally agreed.
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After thinking about the beginning, the next thing to think about is the ending.
According to the three elements of the story, this ending corresponds to the result of the three elements.
He Yuhao said it.
The result is to bypass the action and directly realize the desire.
This is the result.
Then the female catcher’s desire is to protect her daughter, the eldest grandson, Miaomiao.
In other words, in the end, the female arrester really died in the line of duty, and she went to heaven to continue guarding her good daughter.
This is a normal ending and a tragedy.
Of course, in addition to this ending, this story can have several endings.
The daughter does not necessarily refer to the daughter of the female catcher, other people’s daughters are also daughters.
If it is arranged like this, then the ending can be arranged like this.
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In the end, the female arrester killed a powerful opponent, saved countless girls who were captured by bad guys, and protected countless mothers’ daughters.
This is comedy.
Except for these two tragedies and comedies.
In fact, there can be many endings of the story.
Wan Lanxiang and Cabbage took out every ending and discussed it for an hour. Only after discussing for an hour did the final ending of the story be given.
……
the next day.
Wan Lanxiang and Cabbage began to write the text of the movie script.
Cabbage is responsible for writing the outline of each scene of the story, and Wan Lanxiang creates the text based on the outline of each scene written by Bai Cai.
Under the joint efforts of two people.
A 120-minute movie script was completed in just one week.
The first time after finishing the script, Wan Lanxiang picked up her mobile phone and made a call to He Yuhao.
“Teacher, Bai Cai and I have finished writing the script for the movie “You in Heaven”.”
“When will the teacher return to Xiangjiang?”
“Lan Xiang!”
“I still have a few things to deal with in Sijiucheng. Something happened to a branch company under the He Group. I have to deal with it well before I can fly to Xiangjiang.”
“You and Bai Cai have already written the movie script, so you can give it to Song Linglong first!”
“I’ll call Song Linglong and ask her to review the movie script you two wrote.”
| “If Song Linglong passes the review, she will immediately set up the project and start filming. If the two of you are interested, you can also participate in a group of dragon sets.” Enter.
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