After my bestie became famous, I also became famous

Chapter 152: No outline, all made up on the spot

Three housekeeping ladies are busy in the kitchen.

"Auntie, they brought some food. I'll heat it up later."

"Okay, leave it there."

Qian Duo and several others followed in.

After coming in, there were a few more exclamations.

The furnishings inside are even more luxurious.

"Wow! This lamp..."

"This sofa is covered with silk, right?"

Wei Jiayi carefully looked at the vase placed in the transparent glass and kept gasping for air.

"Wow! This vase is a Tang Sancai vase, right?"

"Let me see!"

Shanshan also came over.

She walked around the vase carefully.

"You know what, it's true. This is a good thing. Write it down quickly. You may need it when you write ancient Chinese in the future."

Qian Duo looked at them, who showed no signs of restraint at all, and smiled awkwardly.

As if afraid that Su Meng would be angry, he quickly explained: "Hey, Sister Meng, we have never seen the world.

I’m a little excited.”

Su Meng shook her head: "It's okay, these things are indeed uncommon.

When I first arrived, I was also quite surprised.”

After this period of time, Qian Duo's heart had cooled down a lot.

This is just the first floor, and everything you see is priceless.

Not to mention other places that can't be seen.

This is not a world they can enter.

Three girls gathered around the ceramics, looking at them and discussing with each other.

"How about we go in and play for a while?"

"playing what?"

"Game room, play some new games."

Qian Duo waved his hands repeatedly: "Let's finish the important work first, then we can talk about it."

There is a square table in the game room.

Su Meng had seen it before and it was very suitable for working in.

"Then let's go to the game room. We can also work there."

"Sister Meng~~Is there anything else I can look at~~"

Shanshan came close to Su Meng and asked in a low voice.

Su Meng raised her eyebrows: “I don’t know, you can walk around later, there is a big garden at the back.

The view inside is very nice.”

"Then Sister Meng, can we go take a look?"

Wei Jiayi clasped her hands together and looked at her with bright eyes full of expectation.

Su Meng smiled and said, "Of course."

Pushing open the door of the video game room, you will see a 24k large screen playing the Black Goku animation.

"Oh my god! Such a big screen for playing games!"

"Black Goku!! Sister Meng, you're still playing this!"

Qian Duo looked surprised, as this game had only been out for a few days.

A lot of people play it, but most of them are boys.

Su Meng raised her eyebrows: "Of course, but I'm still at the first level...

I feel a little 3D dizzy, and after playing for more than an hour, I felt like vomiting.

I was very hungry, but now I have no appetite."

Qian Duo looked at the huge screen and said weakly, "Is it possible that it's because the screen is too big and too high definition..."

Su Meng pursed her lips and smiled: "It's possible.

Why are you all standing? Sit down.

Let’s get started.

If you finish it early, you can still have some time to relax and have fun.”

"Sister Meng is right."

"it is good."

"Then let's get started."

The sofas in the room were all made of leather, and several people sat down carefully.

They took out their laptops from their bags.

Su Meng then remembered that she had not taken down her computer this morning.

"You guys start first, I'll go out for a while."

"Okay, Sister Meng."

Qian Duo took over directly.

He is the chief director, so it is reasonable for him to be in the leading position.

Qian Duo directly created a group and invited everyone to join.

"Files and other things can be posted in the group, which makes it more convenient for discussion."

"Then Jiayi, you go first. I want to hear your thoughts on the plot adaptation first.

After listening to it, I discussed with Shanshan how to start. "

"Togo, didn't I send you all the later plots? I don't think those plots are very good.

The plot basically fell apart.

There should be major changes.

The characters are all ruined, and I don’t know how to write characters. The heroine’s behavior has changed significantly from the beginning.

Therefore, the character design still needs some polishing by Shanshan."

As she spoke, she sent the contents of the document she had made overnight to the group.

Su Meng just happened to come back with a computer at this time.

I just found out that a new group has been created.

All four people were inside.

There are also files sent by Wei Jiayi.

"Why post it in the group? Just connect to the screen directly."

Sitting back in his original seat, Su Meng directly called the housekeeper.

"Butler, connect the laptop to the screen."

"OK, Master, connected."

Su Meng opened the desk, which contained a wireless mouse and keyboard connected to the screen.

She pushed the mouse in front of Wei Jiayi.

"let's start."

Qian Duo nodded to Wei Jiayi: "Go on."

Wei Jiayi operated the mouse and clicked on the file.

“This is all the content in the rest of the book. There are still 200,000 words in total that have not been posted on the platform.

There is no outline for the later part, it is all made up on the spot.

But I also extracted the key plot points, all here. ”

As she spoke, she clicked on one of the files in the folder.

The key plot has been refined, totaling about 20,000 words.

It can all be summed up in one sentence.

Several people fell silent and looked at the screen carefully.

After just a few slides, Shanshan called a halt urgently.

"Wait a minute, something's wrong here."

Wei Jiayi immediately stopped sliding the mouse.

"This needs to be changed. It conflicts greatly with the original character of the heroine."

Shanshan stretched out her hand to her, and Jiayi immediately handed her the mouse.

She put a red mark on the line.

“This needs to be changed, and it’s a big change. The heroine’s personality is carefree, but that doesn’t mean she’s brainless.

According to the plot you wrote before, the heroine is very smart.

This is a more obvious poison point.

In order to highlight the villain's high IQ, the heroine's IQ is lowered."

Qian Duo also agreed, “Indeed, the image of the previous heroine was actually quite good.

Here, this villain seems a bit redundant."

Wei Jiayi hurriedly nodded.

Su Meng didn't say anything. She didn't read that much. She just read over a hundred chapters and felt that the subject matter was very novel and interesting.

She doesn't really understand things like character setting.

But it doesn’t matter, there are two people who know what’s going on here, so there’s no need to panic at all.

Shanshan marked out all the ones she thought were problematic.

“In the novel, the character design issues can easily make readers feel uncomfortable, but because the novel is long, most readers can accept it.

But skits are different.

The character of the protagonist must be consistent.

After all, we are a paid platform.

Many viewers are dissatisfied with the show and are likely to comment below.

It will give other viewers a misleading impression.

The writing of this skit is just rubbish.

Do you understand what I mean?"

Shanshan looked at Wei Jiayi seriously.

She really takes teaching seriously.

Wei Jiayi was also very serious, his fingers tapping on the keyboard.

Write down all the key points she said.

Seeing that Wei Jiayi was very humble, Shanshan was also quite satisfied.

As long as you are willing to learn, it is not impossible for her to teach you some tips and experiences.

She continued: “There is another misunderstanding that you must know.

The plot of a skit must be compact, especially the lines between the actors; not a single unnecessary word can be used.

Don't worry about what you are doing, well...

A lot of them, all need to be used in the right place.

When writing a novel, you may need to use these modal particles to express the protagonist's psychology or the supporting character's actions.

But when shooting with real people, there are expressions and movements.

Many of these modal particles can be omitted. "

When Shanshan said these words, Qian Duo lowered his head, looking at the computer, and sent the simple script he had prepared to the group.

There's so much money: Sister Meng, please read the previous content first

Su Meng opened the file on her mobile phone.

It's the first half of the script.

But the content is rather messy, some parts are difficult to understand, and it is a bit uncomfortable to read.

"This is a direct summary. The details need to be revised."

Su Meng understood that Qian Duo was doing this in order to make himself look less boring.

On the other side, Shanshan was still teaching on the spot.